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How to Write Fundraising Letters That Motivate Donors To Make Donations to Your Non-Profit

Motivating strangers to give their money away"Christmas dinner: $2.75." The message is
is one of the hardest jobs around. It'sclear. Give a gift of $2.75 and you'll show
difficult to do face to face. And it's evencompassion in a practical way to a homeless
tougher to do in a letter. But it can beperson this Christmas. You can literally
done. And your chances of receiving gifts in"picture" the difference your donation will
the mail increase once you employ some of themake. Try to paint a picture like that with
tested methods that are used by leadingeach fundraising letter you drop in the
non-profit organizations around themail.Empower your donorsEver heard of "donor
world.Make your message relevantYour appealfatigue?" It's the phrase that fundraisers
letter needs to talk about what's importantuse to describe the feeling of hopelessness
to your donor. Like you, donors listen tothat some donors get by reading fundraising
what interests them. They watch whatappeals from dozens of worthy causes. The
interests them. And they read what interestsweight of the world's troubles produces in
them. There is no reason that what issome donors a sense of futility, believing
important to you and what is important tothat their small gift can't possibly change
your donor cannot be the same thing.Let methe plight of so many people worldwide.The
give you an example of an organization whoway to prevent donor fatigue is to write
got it wrong. A national association raisesfundraising letters that empower your donors.
awareness, provides services and supports"Donors are interested in you because of what
individuals affected by diabetes. Researchyou help them do. You are their agent in
shows that just about every one of theirtheir personal mission to make the world
donors either has diabetes or knows someonebetter. That should be the topic of all your
close to them (father, wife, brother, cousin)fundraising," says Jeff Brooks, senior
who does.And yet this national organizationcreative director at the Domain Group, a
continues to mail appeal letters to itsdirect marketing firm that serves non-profit
donors describing diabetes in the most basicorganizations.Show how past donations are at
terms. "Over two million people in ourworkAnother powerful motivator is proof that
country have diabetes," said a recent letter.a past gift made a difference and continues
"Approximately 10 % of people with diabetesto do so. Tell the story of the toddler whose
have type 1 diabetes," said another."If youlife was saved by the speedy reactions of a
lived with diabetes and donated to thisnurse. Describe how two bikers left a life of
organization, these appeal letters would becrime and gave up drugs thanks to the
irrelevant to you, wouldn't they? First ofintervention of your volunteers.What you are
all, you already know about diabetes. Andaiming for with the printed word is the
secondly, you don't care that "Approximately"feel-good factor." "When we communicate with
10 % of people with diabetes have type 1our donors, we need to continuously let them
diabetes" as much as you care that you haveknow how their gifts make the recipients
it. What this organization needs to do isfeel. That sense of making a meaningful
start writing fundraising letters that speakdifference in a needy person's life or
to their donors where they are now.That meanshelping to make a needed change in the world
crafting letters that help their donors liveis the gift we give our donors," says Jeff
full lives even though they have diabetes.Nickel, group vice president for Grizzard
That means positioning themselves in donor'sSignature Group, a direct response
minds as the single best source offundraising agency.Appeal to head and
information for people who have or areheartMany donors are ultimately motivated by
affected by diabetes. Doing that wouldtheir emotions more than their intellect. But
increase their relevance--and theirto attract and keep loyal donors, you need to
donations.By making your fundraising lettersappeal to both head and heart. You need to
more relevant to your supporters, you willwrite with passion, appealing to each donor's
stand out amidst the many appeal letters thatsense of compassion and empathy. But you also
your donors already receive from otherneed to write with clear-headedness, too,
charities.Use "make-a-difference"mentioning that gifts are tax-deductible,
languageDonors act like investors when theyexplaining how much of a donation goes to
give their money away. They want to know thatprograms and how much covers administrative
their gift will produce a return onexpenses, sometimes listing the rational
investment, however intangible. What you arereasons for supporting your cause, and so
aiming to do with "make-a-difference"on.Raising funds by mail is not a science.
language is show why the world is a betterMethods change because society changes.
place because of your organization.In myPeople change. But these principles have
local newspaper each Christmas, for example,worked for decades, and still do. Put them to
a men's shelter runs a small display ad thatwork in your next campaign and see what
features a photo of a homeless man seated athappens. Drop me a line and let me know how
a dinner table at the mission, eatingyou get on.
Christmas turkey. The headline reads:



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