How to Write Fundraising Letters That Motivate Donors To Make Donations to Your Non-Profit

Motivating strangers to give their money away ismessage is clear. Give a gift of $2.75 and you'll
one of the hardest jobs around. It's difficult to doshow compassion in a practical way to a
face to face. And it's even tougher to do in ahomeless person this Christmas. You can literally
letter. But it can be done. And your chances of"picture" the difference your donation will make.
receiving gifts in the mail increase once youTry to paint a picture like that with each
employ some of the tested methods that arefundraising letter you drop in the mail.Empower
used by leading non-profit organizations aroundyour donorsEver heard of "donor fatigue?" It's the
the world.Make your message relevantYourphrase that fundraisers use to describe the feeling
appeal letter needs to talk about what's importantof hopelessness that some donors get by reading
to your donor. Like you, donors listen to whatfundraising appeals from dozens of worthy
interests them. They watch what interests them.causes. The weight of the world's troubles
And they read what interests them. There is noproduces in some donors a sense of futility,
reason that what is important to you and what isbelieving that their small gift can't possibly change
important to your donor cannot be the samethe plight of so many people worldwide.The way
thing.Let me give you an example of anto prevent donor fatigue is to write fundraising
organization who got it wrong. A nationalletters that empower your donors. "Donors are
association raises awareness, provides servicesinterested in you because of what you help them
and supports individuals affected by diabetes.do. You are their agent in their personal mission to
Research shows that just about every one ofmake the world better. That should be the topic
their donors either has diabetes or knowsof all your fundraising," says Jeff Brooks, senior
someone close to them (father, wife, brother,creative director at the Domain Group, a direct
cousin) who does.And yet this national organizationmarketing firm that serves non-profit
continues to mail appeal letters to its donorsorganizations.Show how past donations are at
describing diabetes in the most basic terms. "OverworkAnother powerful motivator is proof that a
two million people in our country have diabetes,"past gift made a difference and continues to do
said a recent letter. "Approximately 10 % ofso. Tell the story of the toddler whose life was
people with diabetes have type 1 diabetes," saidsaved by the speedy reactions of a nurse.
another."If you lived with diabetes and donated toDescribe how two bikers left a life of crime and
this organization, these appeal letters would begave up drugs thanks to the intervention of your
irrelevant to you, wouldn't they? First of all, youvolunteers.What you are aiming for with the
already know about diabetes. And secondly, youprinted word is the "feel-good factor." "When we
don't care that "Approximately 10 % of peoplecommunicate with our donors, we need to
with diabetes have type 1 diabetes" as much ascontinuously let them know how their gifts make
you care that you have it. What this organizationthe recipients feel. That sense of making a
needs to do is start writing fundraising letters thatmeaningful difference in a needy person's life or
speak to their donors where they are now.Thathelping to make a needed change in the world is
means crafting letters that help their donors livethe gift we give our donors," says Jeff Nickel,
full lives even though they have diabetes. Thatgroup vice president for Grizzard Signature Group,
means positioning themselves in donor's minds asa direct response fundraising agency.Appeal to
the single best source of information for peoplehead and heartMany donors are ultimately
who have or are affected by diabetes. Doing thatmotivated by their emotions more than their
would increase their relevance--and theirintellect. But to attract and keep loyal donors, you
donations.By making your fundraising letters moreneed to appeal to both head and heart. You need
relevant to your supporters, you will stand outto write with passion, appealing to each donor's
amidst the many appeal letters that your donorssense of compassion and empathy. But you also
already receive from other charities.Useneed to write with clear-headedness, too,
"make-a-difference" languageDonors act likementioning that gifts are tax-deductible, explaining
investors when they give their money away.how much of a donation goes to programs and
They want to know that their gift will produce ahow much covers administrative expenses,
return on investment, however intangible. Whatsometimes listing the rational reasons for
you are aiming to do with "make-a-difference"supporting your cause, and so on.Raising funds by
language is show why the world is a better placemail is not a science. Methods change because
because of your organization.In my localsociety changes. People change. But these
newspaper each Christmas, for example, a men'sprinciples have worked for decades, and still do.
shelter runs a small display ad that features aPut them to work in your next campaign and see
photo of a homeless man seated at a dinner tablewhat happens. Drop me a line and let me know
at the mission, eating Christmas turkey. Thehow you get on.
headline reads: "Christmas dinner: $2.75." The